2 things that bug me (if I may) The earth touching the side (creating a tangent with the right side)I would say either crop at 2/3 or leave some negative space on the right side.
also the kinkyness of the ipod chord. I think if it flowed smoother the illustration would have even more of a gentle/delicate feeling to it.
Thanks Brian! I saw the tangent last night when I showed it to my wife. I appreciate the feedback. It's great motivation to try harder the next time to get it right!
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hey man you have improved so much so fast...great stuff keep it up. You're definately and inspiration.
nice image.
2 things that bug me (if I may)
The earth touching the side (creating a tangent with the right side)I would say either crop at 2/3 or leave some negative space on the right side.
also the kinkyness of the ipod chord.
I think if it flowed smoother the illustration would have even more of a gentle/delicate feeling to it.
Nice concept.
-brian
Thanks Brian! I saw the tangent last night when I showed it to my wife. I appreciate the feedback. It's great motivation to try harder the next time to get it right!
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